Need help for glass castle book review correction

Hi Glass castle book Here my instructor comments about the paper ” you spend far too many pages summarizing the book instead of applying any concepts from the class. We have covered child care (and costs and decisions around that), we have discussed budgets, etc. We’ve discussed Maslow’s hierarchy of need, etc. These pieces are missing from your paper and need to be there. The organization is also a bit off. Try to make the paper chronological so it reads easier. The rest of my comments are in the attached document. if you can do some correction from the comments she gave ill be very appreciate it. it is due Nov 19 12:amGhadah.docx