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My name is Jasmine Bailey and I am very interested indeed ecstatic about wanting to work for Yogurtland. Along with, its my favorite yogurt/ice cream place that I frequently get- the Birthday Batter is one of my favorite flavored yogurt. Also, importantly, I believe I am the best fit for this job and have the skills and talents to perform such job expertly. In addition to this, It would be an accomplishment for me to earn my way in becoming the manager for your company. Lastly, if you want to reach me seek my number down below and do not hesitate to call !!!


Thank you, have a delightful day !!!

Also, i want you to look at my resume and tell me if its good or not